Appendix I

Analytical Scoring Heuristic
Essay Evaluation
 
CONTROLLING IDEA/UNITY/THESIS
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Clear and focused; content         too broad; does not indicate        unclear; content/
supports well-stated thesis        direction; leans towards fact only;        thesis conflict;
                                                  unsophisticated—3 point thesis            no position                                                                           
 
ORGANIZATION
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Clear transitions;                                interrupted flow of ideas;                  ineffective
meaningful ordering of                     ineffective introduction and/or         unclear
ideas within paragraphs                    conclusion; rhetorical strategies       ordering
and within the piece as a whole;     not consistently used; weak
introduction and conclusion              transitions
frame essay
 
DEVELOPMENT AND SUPPORT
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Sufficient, relevant                           support is evident but sparse     inadequate,
supporting details; piece                  paragraphs lack adequate         irrelevant
teaches the reader;                           development                             details
ample specificity
 
EXPRESSION
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Specific vivid vocabulary;              little sentence variety; minimal           clichés; diction
sentence variety; appropriate        mastery of vocabulary use;                 problems
diction; language supports             inaccurate or little subordination/                              
purpose                                          coordination usage; parallelism problems
 
WRITER ENGAGEMENT
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 Creative thinking;                           shows some "voice";                        minimal writer
considers audience                            some creative ideas                     involvement
response; relies upon                        no "new" ideas   
looking at old ideas
in a new way
                                                                                                                           
MECHANICS -- Form
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Demonstrates mastery               a variety of errors; comma splices,       errors impede
of conventions                           spelling, punctuation, run-ons,              understanding
Follow procedures.                   capitalization, subject/verb agreement                                                    pronoun reference, fragments, etc.

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